نگارش جمله ی آغازین گزارشات رایتینگ Task 1 آیلتس آکادمیک
IELTS Writing Task 1 - The Opening Statement
همانطور که می بینید، پاراگراف مقدمه (introductory paragraph) گزارشات آیلتس از دو بخش تشکیل می شود که بخش اول ضروری و بخش دوم اختیاری می باشد. بخش اول، "جمله ی آغازین" یا "Opening Statement" نام دارد و بخش دوم نیز "بررسی کلی یا اجمالی نمودار" یا "Overview" بوده که باید در پاراگراف مقدمه بعد از جمله ی آغازین آورده شود و یا در پاراگراف آخر نوشته شود. مطلب نگارش پاراگراف مقدمه رایتینگ تسک یک آیلتس آکادمیک را ببینید. در این مطلب به آموزش نگارشِ بخش اول یا "جمله ی آغازین" خواهیم پرداخت.
این جمله درواقع "دوباره نویسی" یا یک "paraphrase" از صورت سوال یا "rubric/prompt" می باشد. در دوباره نویسی، همان مطلب، به بیانی دیگر عنوان می گردد.
بگذارید این مطلب را با چند مثال شفاف تر کنیم:
در نمونه ی بالا، صورت سوال بولد شده است. قرار است که این جمله، در ابتدای پاراگراف مقدمه دوباره نویسی یا paraphrase شود. در paraphrasing، اطلاعات هیچ تغییری نکرده و فقط به بیانی دیگر و با استفاده از کلماتِ خود نویسنده گفته می شوند. پس این جمله را می توان به این شکل دوباره نویسی کرد.
Rubric: The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
Paraphrased: The bar chart shows the amount of time British people spent on various phone calls, over a seven-year period of time between 1995 and 2002.
دقت کنید به چه صورت بخش های خاصی از صورت سوالات رایتینگ تسک یک دوباره نویسی می شوند. جایگزین های هر بخش با رنگ خاص آورده شده اند:
The bar chart shows the amount of time British people spent on various phone calls, over a seven-year period of time between 1995 and 2002 .
the bar graph
the given visual
the diagram/illustration
the info graphic
the graphic
the provided chart
gives information/data about…
demonstrates
displays
represents
illustrates
depicts
indicates
between 1985 and 2000
from 1985 to 2000
in 10 years’ time
over the past ten years
over a … period between 1960 and 2005
over a forty-five-year period
over the 25-year timescale
since 1985 (present perfect tense)
since research began
شما می توانید هر کدام از موارد را به جای کلمات جایگزین رنگی بگذارید.
نکته: برای جداول ( Tables )، فقط از افعال show, represent, give data/informatioاستفاده می شود.
نوبت شماست!
جمله ی آغازین rubric های زیر را بنویسید. برای دو نمونه ی اول، یک نمونه از صدها نمونه ی قابل قبول آورده شده است.
Writing Task 1 – Sample 02
You should spend 20 minutes on this task.
The chart below shows the different levels of post-graduate qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
Sample:
The provided chart shows how in Australia, male and female students studied various post-graduate levels and the number of qualifications they held in 1999.
Writing Task 1 – Sample 03
You should spend 20 minutes on this task.
The bar graphs below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
Writing Task 1 – Sample 04
You should spend 20 minutes on this task.
The three charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular US school in 1981, 1991, and 2001.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
Writing Task 1 – Sample 05
You should spend 20 minutes on this task.
The table shows the percentage of Australian graduates in full-time employment two months after graduating, between 2010 and 2030.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
Some times in writing task 1:
from your own knowledge, you need to write a short paragraph to describe a process like below:
نکته : ترک های صوتی که بعد از توضیح هر سایکل آمده است تنها برای کمک به تمرین بخش اسپیکینگ شماست و هدف دیگری در توضیحات این بخش ندارد.
A: The water cycle which creates clouds and rainfall.
When temperature rises in a warm area, water in the rivers evaporates into air. This air rises high and then turns into clouds. Once clouds are formed, they travel from warm areas to cold ones. Finally, when temperature falls, these clouds condense to form raindrops which fall to the ground as rain.
B: The life cycle of a butterfly.
First of all, an adult female butterfly lays eggs on a leaf of a plant. After few days, theses eggs hatch and produce larvae which remain hibernate through the whole winters, or turn into pupae. These pupae, after few weeks, develop wings. As soon as wings are formed, pupae- now known as butterfly- starts flying, and in turn lay eggs on the leaf to complete its life cycle.
C: The progress of a letter from packaging to delivery.
As soon as the letter is closed and the address is written on the envelope, it is dropped into the letterbox. It is collected and then stamped in the post office by the postal worker. After that, the letter is transported to the city of the address. Once it is reached, the letter is further stamped in the post office and given to the mail carrier who, finally, delivers the letter to its destination.
D: The process of digital photography from taking a photograph to displaying the image.
At first, the camera is focused on a view of which the photograph is taken. After making the camera ready, picture is clicked by pushing a button on the camera. Once the photograph is taken, it is transferred to computer where it is edited according to the demand. The photograph is subsequently ready for display.
wish you the best
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